
PHOTO PROMPT © Amanda Forestwood
It’s that time again! Time to gather around the table and share some juicy tidbits of fiction with the folks of Friday Fictioneers, hosted by the lovely and talented Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. You can find other small tales of wonder, and danger at: rochellewisoff.com. Come on out and join us! This week’s photo is loaned to us by : Amanda Forestwood.
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Battlement
I stand on the old battlements
moss now covers where blood once ran
bird calls replace the agonized screams
tall, strong trees now stand
where once young boys and men fell
the old battlefield calls to be remembered
the souls forever trapped here
reach out to the living
their cries muffled by fallen leaves
warning us not to follow in their path
but to move upward and above
to live life in peace.
I stand on the battlement today
and listen…
B.McQuinn
Author’s Note: I’ve been mighty sick these past few weeks. In and out of hospital fighting a bacterial infection that began as a result of discovering a severe food allergy. Another discovery is a bit more unsettling. I go back to doc in July to be tested for female Cancers. I’ve reached the calm acceptance of what could be, my affairs are in order (or as about as orderly as I can afford to do). I’m resting alot, spending that time in deep prayers for the people in my life, including all who read my little stories, poems, and enjoy my art. I do ask that you keep myself and hubby in your prayers as these weeks of waiting are sure to get to stretch us.
If only we could hear and take note of those muffled cries. Nicely done.
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And wishes of peace to you, Bear
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Dear Bear,
I could hear the birdsong in the quiet and the echoes of the young men who’d sacrified their lives there. Well done.
So sorry about your trials of late and am praying for your recovery and the absence of cancer.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Stirring words, and my thoughts to you and a hope that your health improves. Best wishes.
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I’m sorry it’s been tough for you. I hope you have good words and a path to recovery.
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Beautiful. To stand and gather the sense of history in a moment. Love your descriptions here.
Take care and I hope hope your tests come back negative. I have crossed all fingers and toes for you
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You are certainly on the field of battle – keep strong, sending a virtual hug❤️
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Thank you. Today is a good day. I managed a load of laundry and went to grocer. Small steps. Remaining positive. Enjoying each day.
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🙌❤️
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Haunting. Great descriptions. You brought us to the battlement with you.
I hope your health improves and you don’t have the dreaded C-word or worst case, catch it early.
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Thanks, Nobbin. I’m at peace whatever the answer. I am feeling a lot better, and can eat now. In the meantime I’ve gone from a large to a medium in clothing. Everything’s hanging. Had to get me a new pair of slacks. Not the way I wanted to lose weight, but if it comes…enjoy it!
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Illness is not the best diet plan, but it always good to see the bright side.
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A beautiful tale told in just a few words.
Life won’t cut you a break. I’m so sorry!
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nice poem. hauntingly beautiful.
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Beautiful prose, Bear. May you be swathed in healing energy and be in complete health by test time.
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Such a poignant tale well told. I am so sorry to read about your health issues and prayer for recovery and healing.
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Thank you, especially for prayers
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